I've listed this article for peer review because I want to hear others' opinions about this article, so I can improve it. Thanks, Yerevanci (talk) 18:23, 20 June 2012 (UTC) * See WP:LEAD for recommendations on numbers of paragraphs for this length of article. * "In 1912-1913" needs to be an en-dash here per WP:DASH. * "Andranik in Paris, 1921." no full stop required in this caption as it's not a complete sentence. Check all other captions. * "which was about to wipe off Armenia from the face of the Earth." true as it may be, this is a somewhat emotive way of putting it. Try to keep the tone neutral. * "Andranik combated in " -> "Andranik fought in " * "and died 5 years " 5->five. * Avoid squashing text between images/infobox etc. * Some of the early parts of E