I tried to expand as much history as possible. Comments? 07:04, August 29, 2011 (UTC) Maybe add a quote of Bluekit mentioning her? (sorry, new here >.<) Misty! 07:13, August 29, 2011 (UTC) Yes add all the quotes that relate to her (I think there's two: the one mentioned above and the one where Pinestar is talking about his first battle.) Also, see if you can smooth out the first paragraph of BP. 10:13, August 29, 2011 (UTC) Done everything. 06:37, September 2, 2011 (UTC) The first paragraph of her article is very terse and choppy so I would make it flow better. 14:03, September 2, 2011 (UTC)