I'd like Gerrycheevers to do this, if possible since he did the first one. 22:49, 13 August 2008 (UTC) i will take another look at this today hopefully. barring that, definitely tomorrow. 19:28, 15 August 2008 (UTC) sorry i took so long ape, i wanted to give the article time to drift out of my head so i could read it over again and see how it's improved. 21:01, 18 August 2008 (UTC)