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Comments? ☮OwlXGlitter☮..4EVERThe Peace is Perfect☯ 05:29, September 24, 2011 (UTC) Sign of the Moon seems like it's just listing out the appearences/mentions Splash had in the book. Connect many of the short sentences together as they're quite abridged. As well as adding transitions and paragraph breaks where needed. 15:17, September 24, 2011 (UTC) I agree with Atelda. Also, find another quote if possible. The main quote shouldn't be repeated in the "Quotes" section. Redundancy doesn't look good. =P 15:21, September 24, 2011 (UTC) Adding to CBV list... 02:56, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

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Comments? ☮OwlXGlitter☮..4EVERThe Peace is Perfect☯ 05:29, September 24, 2011 (UTC) Sign of the Moon seems like it's just listing out the appearences/mentions Splash had in the book. Connect many of the short sentences together as they're quite abridged. As well as adding transitions and paragraph breaks where needed. 15:17, September 24, 2011 (UTC) I agree with Atelda. Also, find another quote if possible. The main quote shouldn't be repeated in the "Quotes" section. Redundancy doesn't look good. =P 15:21, September 24, 2011 (UTC) Just to let you know the main quote wasn't repeated in the Quotes section when I checked and I did add in another quote before. I'm not trying to sound stubborn or anything, it's just that I did and when I checked it wasn't there. Anyway I tried to smooth the Sign of the Moon section and added another 3 quotes. Although I'm not sure if the two last quotes should both be in there, or only one of them, or neither, or if they should be connected, because they're both on the same page. ☮OwlXGlitter☮..4EVERThe Peace is Perfect☯ 01:20, September 25, 2011 (UTC) It looks pretty good. One thing that caught my eye is that the first paragraph of the SoTM didn't read smoothly. Try merging some of the first few sentences, like where Splash is mentioned going out on patrol and when she helps Dovewing out of the snow. Other than that, I think it looks pretty good! Hollydapple798 01:57, September 26, 2011 (UTC) Done ☮OwlXGlitter☮..4EVERThe Peace is Perfect☯ 05:26, September 26, 2011 (UTC) You should only have three quotes. I think you should keep the first, second and last. However, it's up to you, since you're the one nominating her. 06:37, September 29, 2011 (UTC) I think I agree with you Cloudy, and I did delete the third and fourth quote. OwlXGlitter4LIFE.. The colors of fall 01:17, September 30, 2011 (UTC) Adding to CBV list... 02:56, October 8, 2011 (UTC) CBV? 00:41, October 15, 2011 (UTC) Vote is up! 03:17, October 16, 2011 (UTC)