. "File:Brokenstar.elder.alt.png Brokenstar was mentioned as black in BotC and at that point in time he was an elder, so I figured it would be fine to make this. I need some help with the broken tail. I was just gonna copy it from his elder image, but that turned out to be harder than I thought it would be.... Anyways, comments? \u2665 Paleclaw May StarClan be with you \u2665 07:50, April 18, 2011 (UTC) Nevermind, I managed to copy the broken tail. XD \u2665 Paleclaw May StarClan be with you \u2665 08:07, April 18, 2011 (UTC) Ooh. Me likey! Maybe redden the earpink a bit and blur it. Perhaps darken the image, as right now it looks more dark gray than black. And change the shading on the tail; if your light source is from the front (which it appears to be) then the shading should be the opposite of what it is right now. And maybe smudge the eye lineart a tad just so it looks more like he's blind. wildheart spring rain \u266B 08:12, April 18, 2011 (UTC) Reuploaded - I darkened the image, fixed the tail shading, and made it look like he's blind. :) \u2665 Paleclaw May StarClan be with you \u2665 08:26, April 18, 2011 (UTC) Nice job! Blur the highlights. 19:35, April 18, 2011 (UTC) Reuploaded - I blurred them as much as they can be blurred now. :) \u2665 Paleclaw May StarClan be with you \u2665 22:49, April 18, 2011 (UTC) Lighten the shading on the haunch a tad, add/darken the shading under the forelegs, brighten the ear-pink a tad and center it. ScarletwindStep into theLight 00:49, April 19, 2011 (UTC) Reuploaded - I'm not sure that helped much, but I did my best. \u2665 Paleclaw May StarClan be with you \u2665 06:56, April 19, 2011 (UTC) Redden the earpink a bit. Reuploaded - Personally, I kinda think this is getting TOO red, but that's just me... XD \u2665 Paleclaw May StarClan be with you \u2665 22:50, April 19, 2011 (UTC) Center the ear pink and darken the tail shading. Nightshine 05:24, April 20, 2011 (UTC) Reuploaded - Centered the earpink best I could and darkened the tail shading. I also desaturated the scar on his eyes cause it was really buggin me. XD \u2665 Paleclaw May StarClan be with you \u2665 05:45, April 20, 2011 (UTC) Comments? Sorry I'm a bit impatient. XD \u2665 Paleclaw May StarClan be with you \u2665 05:19, April 24, 2011 (UTC) Darken the neck shading a bit. Nightshine 03:50, April 25, 2011 (UTC) Blur the tail shading a bit. 22:16, April 25, 2011 (UTC) Reuploaded - Blurred the tail shading and darkened the neck shading. Edit - The changes aren't showing for some reason. They might later though. \u2665 Paleclaw May StarClan be with you \u2665 05:03, April 26, 2011 (UTC) I see the changes. Darken the tail shading a bit? wildheart spring rain \u266B 06:44, April 26, 2011 (UTC) Reuploaded - Darkened the tail shading. \u2665 Paleclaw May StarClan be with you \u2665 21:59, April 26, 2011 (UTC) Looks great! The earpink could be reddened a bit. 22:19, April 26, 2011 (UTC) Lighten the shading by the base of the tail, by the belly, and on his right forelegs. ScarletwindStep into theLight 20:58, April 27, 2011 (UTC) The eye looks blurred to me, but that could just be me. Otherwise it looks pretty darn good :) 00:08, April 28, 2011 (UTC) Reuploaded - I lightened the shading said places and reddened the earpink. That's as red as I'm going, if I do it more it'll look like his ear's bleeding. XD And yes, his eye's blurred. I was told to do that. He was blind when he was an elder and it helps make him look like he was. \u2665 Paleclaw May StarClan be with you \u2665 05:58, April 28, 2011 (UTC) Comments before approval? Nightshine 00:37, April 29, 2011 (UTC) I hate to be picky, but there looks like there's a patch of a shading by the base of the tail that's darker than the rest. Can you blur it out a bit more? ScarletwindStep into theLight 22:47, April 29, 2011 (UTC) Reuploaded - I did my best to fix the shading there, but it's blurred as much as it can be and it seems to be the same tone according to gimp, so.... *shrugs* \u2665 Paleclaw May StarClan be with you \u2665 23:33, April 29, 2011 (UTC) There's a bit of waste outside the front paw. I like this =D wildheart spring rain \u266B 01:01, April 30, 2011 (UTC) Thanks. :) And there's nothing outside the front paw.... 0.o I make sure of that before I reupload, and I don't see any... \u2665 Paleclaw May StarClan be with you \u2665 01:19, April 30, 2011 (UTC) It's a faint outline on the front paw that's closest to us. Maybe try re-uploading the pic again. Perhaps the changes aren't showing...? wildheart spring rain \u266B 03:01, April 30, 2011 (UTC) Reuploaded - I didn't see anything before and I still don't see anything, but I reuploaded it.... \u2665 Paleclaw May StarClan be with you \u2665 03:40, April 30, 2011 (UTC) Repeating 24 hours. Nightshine 05:53, April 30, 2011 (UTC) I think the scars should be more spread apart; they almost look like one big pink face stripe. 23:48, May 1, 2011 (UTC) The 24 hours were over when Nightflower commented. This should be approved. wildheart spring rain \u266B 05:50, May 2, 2011 (UTC) So is this approved or do I have to do what Nightflower said...? \u2665 Paleclaw May StarClan be with you \u2665 21:32, May 2, 2011 (UTC) I see nothing wrong with the scar, and it was been 24 hours, I think it should be approved and go on his page. It's not for me to decide though xD [Ivystripe not signed in] 209.34.114.210 14:21, May 3, 2011 (UTC) I'm going to go ahead and approve this. --Nightshine 05:48, May 4, 2011 (UTC)"@en . "File:Brokenstar.elder.alt.png Brokenstar was mentioned as black in BotC and at that point in time he was an elder, so I figured it would be fine to make this. I need some help with the broken tail. I was just gonna copy it from his elder image, but that turned out to be harder than I thought it would be.... Anyways, comments? \u2665 Paleclaw May StarClan be with you \u2665 07:50, April 18, 2011 (UTC) Nevermind, I managed to copy the broken tail. XD \u2665 Paleclaw May StarClan be with you \u2665 08:07, April 18, 2011 (UTC) Nice job! Blur the highlights. 19:35, April 18, 2011 (UTC) Redden the earpink a bit."@en . "Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 69"@en .