"[[File:Nightwhisper.kit.png]]Not sure if I'm allowed to put this here since I'm not a member yet but here is my first charart. My sister Tigerbird showed me how to make chararts. 20:27, January 3, 2015 (UTC) Lower the shading on the chin, and define the shading on the tail, and maybe erase a bit of the shading on that back foot. Jayie Unwritten words~ 02:22, January 4, 2015 (UTC) Re-upped How do you get promoted to an apprentice rank? 02:33, January 4, 2015 (UTC) 02:34, January 4, 2015 (UTC) Smooth out the shading and I'll go make you an apprentice now. Re-uploaded 02:32, January 6, 2015 (UTC)"@en . "[[File:Nightwhisper.kit.png]]Not sure if I'm allowed to put this here since I'm not a member yet but here is my first charart. My sister Tigerbird showed me how to make chararts. 20:27, January 3, 2015 (UTC) Lower the shading on the chin, and define the shading on the tail, and maybe erase a bit of the shading on that back foot. Jayie Unwritten words~ 02:22, January 4, 2015 (UTC) Re-upped How do you get promoted to an apprentice rank? 02:33, January 4, 2015 (UTC) 02:34, January 4, 2015 (UTC) A senior warrior will promote you when they think you are ready. Blur the shading more? ~ Burntclaw Yolo \u266B \u266A 04:22, January 4, 2015 (UTC) This is very good for your first! Could you add some shading to his legs? I see his paw shading; but if you did add leg shading, could you possibly define it? (As in, unblur/unsmudge it?) It may just be my screen; so if you think its fine, dont worry about it. 07:45, January 4, 2015 (UTC) Smooth out the shading and I'll go make you an apprentice now. Re-uploaded Thank you everyone! Also, I smudge my shading. 16:27, January 4, 2015 (UTC) You can still smooth it out even though it's smudged. Although that's nice to know for future references so we don't get into another screaming match over ways to shade. x.x Smooth it out a bit more? Re-uploaded 02:32, January 6, 2015 (UTC) Smooth out the shading under his chin just a tad. 12:54, January 7, 2015 (UTC) Re-uploaded 02:25, January 9, 2015 (UTC) It still looks hard edged over there. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 14:05, January 9, 2015 (UTC) Re-uploaded 00:45, January 10, 2015 (UTC) Could you smooth out all of the shading just a little? It still looks a bit hard edged in places. Idk, if you think its fine, feel free to leave it. 02:23, January 11, 2015 (UTC) I agree with Breeze. While you're at it thicken the shading under his chin. Looking good :D ~ Burntclaw Yolo \u266B \u266A 09:05, January 11, 2015 (UTC) Lighten the shading a tad. It looks a little too dark to me. 22:30, January 12, 2015 (UTC) The darkness is fine as is. ~ Burntclaw Yolo \u266B \u266A 10:04, January 13, 2015 (UTC) Lightening it a little bit wouldn't hurt, honestly. It does appear rather dark on my laptop. Is this still being worked on? Re-uploaded 00:19, January 16, 2015 (UTC) i know that this is a bit hard edged but if I smudge it more it'll get messed up. 00:22, January 16, 2015 (UTC) Lighten up the shading please. 22:44 Sat Jan 17 The shading is very hard edged. Smudge it more? ~ Burntclaw Yolo \u266B \u266A 08:28, January 18, 2015 (UTC) I am withdrawing. 19:09, January 18, 2015 (UTC) Archiving."@en . . "Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Declined 72"@en .