"Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 84"@en . . "File:Beetlenose.apprentice.png Here he is. Comments? 16:52, December 29, 2011 (UTC) Lighten him up, then add shading. The lineart is very hard to see. 17:28, December 29, 2011 (UTC) Is my computer or does he look like a really dark brown but not black. Acornflight Med. Cat ofLunarClan! 20:38, December 30, 2011 (UTC) It's probably your computer and re-uploaded. 20:48, December 30, 2011 (UTC) I can barely see the shading. Darken or define it. 00:31, Sat, Dec, 31, 2011 Re-Uplaoded. 22:41, December 31, 2011 (UTC) Lighten the base colour a lot and add some depth to the eyes. 22:54 Sun Jan 1 Blur the earpink a lot. 03:18, January 2, 2012 (UTC) Re-Uploaded. 18:58, January 2, 2012 (UTC) Lighten the base colour more and blur the shading. Smudge the earpink into the ear with a smaller brush so it looks like fur. 02:23 Tue Jan 3 Re-Uplaoded. 21:30, January 3, 2012 (UTC) Darken the shading. 02:15 Wed Jan 4 Re-Uploaded. 20:33, January 4, 2012 (UTC) Define the shading a lot. 23:06, January 4, 2012 (UTC) Define the light on the face and shoulder 05:07, January 7, 2012 (UTC) Re-Uplaoded. 16:38, January 7, 2012 (UTC) Could you maybe lighten the shading on the face...? It looks a little dark on my screen... 17:54, January 7, 2012 (UTC) I'm going to withdraw this. My time on Wikia \"has been limited\", says Mom and Dad. 01:18, January 8, 2012 (UTC) I'll take over. I withdrew Firestar Squishee I am le Puppeh! 04:22, January 8, 2012 (UTC) Reuploaded Okay it doesn't look like it, but it's different. Squishee I am le Puppeh! 02:35, January 10, 2012 (UTC) Remember to change the heading. Nice work, but define and blur the shading/highlights and blur the earpink. 00:08, January 11, 2012 (UTC) Reuploaded Sorry I forgot to change the heading. Squishee I am le Puppeh! 01:33, January 11, 2012 (UTC) blur the earpink and redden it, and either brighten the highlights, or lighten the base coat. It's too dark to see the shading. \u2654\u24C5\u24D0\u24C1\u24D4\u24B8\u24DB\u24B6\u24E6\u2655 \u2606StarClan be with you\u2605 15:51, January 11, 2012 (UTC) Reuploaded I re-did it using the colors from the warrior. Squishee I am le Puppeh! 16:30, January 14, 2012 (UTC) Define the shading. Nice. 01:05, January 16, 2012 (UTC) I'm not gonna change it unless somebody else says so. I took all of the colors from the warrior. Squishee I am le Puppeh! 01:19, January 16, 2012 (UTC) Define the shading. 14:35 Mon Jan 16 Blur the earpink. 00:04, January 18, 2012 (UTC) Make the light parts lighter, I can hardly see him. o3o Sky- Fightin 'gainst the Legolution 01:09, January 18, 2012 (UTC) Reuploaded I'm working on two solids? Oh, joy! :\\ Sandlegs What's up with Leggy? 01:13, January 18, 2012 (UTC) Everything's up with Leggy. xD Anyway, can you smudge the earpink into the ear a little more? 01:24, January 18, 2012 (UTC) Umm if I do, whitch I tryed, it looks really horrible and bad. And I cant blur it easily... oh yeah I know why, because your awesome. End of the world xD Sandlegs What's up with Leggy? 01:32, January 18, 2012 (UTC) It's spelt 'tried'. ^^ Try smudging into the ear using the sides of the earpink, it just seems to go up from the middle. ^^ Sky- Fightin 'gainst the Legolution 10:40, January 18, 2012 (UTC) reuploaded well you know I cant spell! Sandlegs What's up with Leggy? 01:00, January 19, 2012 (UTC) Blur the earpink and make the smudges look natural by making it a bit smaller. 02:04, January 19, 2012 (UTC) No offence, but the earpink smudge looks like a blob. Smudge the pelt into the corner of the ears please. 22:14 Thu Jan 19 Reuploaded Okay now does it look better? Sandlegs What's up with Leggy? 22:32, January 19, 2012 (UTC) Blur and smudge the earpink some more. 03:59, January 20, 2012 (UTC) Lighten the base pelt a little so that the shading is more noticeable. 03:49, January 21, 2012 (UTC) Smudge the pelt into the corners of the earpink. 20:56 Sat Jan 21 Make the \"highlights\" a bit more noticeable. It almost looks like you just filled him in with black. 21:43, January 24, 2012 (UTC) Reuploaded I'm sorry but the base color is taken exactly from the warrior. The shading is also taken from his...sorry. Sandlegs What's up with Leggy? 03:05, January 25, 2012 (UTC) I think this looks fine, CBA? 04:44, January 26, 2012 (UTC) I'm sorry but smudge the (<---)corner of the (--->) ear more, oter wise this is perfect. 02:56, January 27, 2012 (UTC) Also blur the earpink. 09:56, January 28, 2012 (UTC) Define the back leg shading. 19:15 Sat Jan 28 Lighten the earpink so that it matches the warrior. 20:10, January 29, 2012 (UTC) Reuploaded Okay I think this'll be my last reupload because...well look at my user page. Anyway all of the colors are from the warrior. I hope nobody kills me >_>;;; Sandy I think Daddy's my slave! 17:01, February 1, 2012 (UTC) I think this is ready Sand, CBA? 17:49, February 3, 2012 (UTC) Approved. 21:02, February 3, 2012 (UTC)"@en . "File:Beetlenose.apprentice.png Here he is. Comments? 16:52, December 29, 2011 (UTC) Lighten him up, then add shading. The lineart is very hard to see. 17:28, December 29, 2011 (UTC) Is my computer or does he look like a really dark brown but not black. Acornflight Med. Cat ofLunarClan! 20:38, December 30, 2011 (UTC) It's probably your computer and re-uploaded. 20:48, December 30, 2011 (UTC) I can barely see the shading. Darken or define it. 00:31, Sat, Dec, 31, 2011 Re-Uplaoded. 22:41, December 31, 2011 (UTC) Lighten the base colour a lot and add some depth to the eyes. 22:54 Sun Jan 1"@en .